saw the thumb instantly and thought it looked intruging! I was right. Interesting poses. Looks like they're dreaming into the sky. Great work man. +fav

Yaay!! I got to see it first. n.n Ahhh.. I love it so much.

Like I said, the poses really catch my eye. They're well proportioned and eye pleasing. And the posture of them leaning on eachother is.. breathtakingly perfect. n.n Both characters look great.. Hod's a sexy bitch, as always.. and I like this new guy!

Overall.. You rock so horribly much, that I will worship you forever. Even when you're some famous bishounen. ^o^

-Mori

Looking absolutely great, amazing, their faces are nearing perfection. Awesome perspective. I'm a total whore for nice B&W art. What animanga artists are you influenced by?

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Aww thats so nice n.n! I am actually kinda flattered you think my art is that good...o.o;;...but thanks for the fav I really appreciate it n.n!!

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poor Hod...his sexy bitchness is going to get him hurt one day LOL! Yeah.....I am thinking of naming the new guy Binah but I am not sure..because Binah is supposed to be a girl in my story...so he might have to be named something else....oh well...poor neglected unnamed bishy thing X3!

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actually my influences are Clamp and but..ah..*cough cough* DEFINATLY not what brought this around as the nature was, as said, a bit kinky LMAO. People are going to have to guess this one ! Sorries n.n;;

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NM NO...his name is DIN dammit..DIN!! Din and Hod...how perfect is that X3 LMAO!!!!

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OKie, this is just too awesome I adore the angle...I ADORE it you hear me. I particuarly like their expressions and clothes as well..an the black and white is a nice look to this...ugh...I want this picture so bad now....I wish I could draw like this even when tired. I wish I could draw at all right now *thunks head* I'm in such a bad state of drawing mind....did that make sense? Anyway awesome job, really. I love this more than I should I think.

OKay C&C time from the meeeee (since you asked...thats right people he ASKED me to crit this so DONT YELL AT ME IF YOU THINK IM BEING MEAN...end disclaimer)

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Well first of all I have to say the composition, I dig, I love the fact that your trying something really dynamic out. Not to say your usual stuff isnt good, but this is -really- different from you and Im glad you did it.
The foreshortening in this is really complex, but I think it only really half works the way you want it to ^_^* Hod looks great, his right shoulder might be a bit too far forward, if that -is- his shoulder there, if you cant see his right shoulder, Id add it in maybe. You would see a bit of it up closer to his neck I think.
His torso seems a little long, but its nothing really that's wrong per say, it could just be the warped perspective style you were going for.
The other guy throws it all off for me. The warped look you were going for with Hod being really thin and lanky is countered by this guy being -really- short torso'd and thick. If your going to manipulate one character to the extreme it would be better to keep the theme going rather than have such a major change. It makes the manipulation of their anatomy seem more intentional and less arbitrary. Dude w/no name on the right has some rather odd hand positions too. His right looks way too far back to be in his pocket (I assume?) so (to me at least) it looks more like he's grabbing at his bum! Which he could be doing, I dont know him! The other hand ( I THINK thats his hand, like the black part sticking out by his chest) Dude you know me, and you know Im a dirty dirty thinker, but that could be construed as something totally other than what you want it to be ^_^****

I think both their hands could use some more detail to make the actual pose of them clearer, I got that Hod's thumb was in his pocket just from where it was on his pants, but I think a little more detail would help bump it up some. Less hand-like-object and more "hey thats a hand!" (I know you can draw hands so that shouldnt be a problem for yoooou!)

This isnt a crit, but the face style looks totally different than what you normally draw! Im not saying thats a bad thing, I just was surprised when I saw it~ I dunno if you got a new influence latley (since you've been gone like a few MONTHS! *kick*...oh wait I know why you were gone...*takes the kick back*) but its different ^_^

One other minor thing, and I know I've harassed you about it before, UP YOUR CONTRAST! Those white/gray lines that are outlining your solid blacks SO throw off the great negative space your going for! You dont even NEED to delineate between where Hod's shirt stops and his pants start, you have a great minimalistic black and white image going here, dont ruin it with unessecarry graytones and white lines! *gnaws on your head*
DONT MAKE ME EAT YOU FACE!


Okay, that was a long crit, but you had to expect that, you asked me for it *L* Lemme know if you need anything else and I shall be there, wooosh!

that posing is top-notch, if you ask me. I could never draw somewthing like this in a million years.

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